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Very enjoyable! Can’t wait to see how this will develop!

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Thanks so much, Audrey, glad you are enjoying it :-)

-Adam

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Jun 20Liked by Adam Rockwell

Loving this so far - great action.

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Thanks so much, Mike! I really appreciate your comment. Writing action is one of my favorite things to write. Thanks for reading!! 😄

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Great additional drama with the character and his differences with the actual police. That's a really strong angle to go with for this, because I think most people don't even know what TSA does. Love that.

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Thanks, Matthew. I'm glad you picked up on that, I've thought a lot about it as I wrote it. I go into more depth on that as the story proceeds (the police stuff).

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Of course, a cliff hanger leading into a meditation room!

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😂 I needed to have a meditation room😇

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Of course you did. I’m eager to see what enlightenment happens in there.

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Great paranormal action. More please!

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Thanks Paul, that’s very kind of you to say 😄 (Tuesday is the big inciting incident!)

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